{"id":178,"date":"2023-03-22T20:17:45","date_gmt":"2023-03-22T20:17:45","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/dazed-starling\/?p=178"},"modified":"2023-03-08T20:19:25","modified_gmt":"2023-03-08T20:19:25","slug":"experimenting-with-form-poetry","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/dazed-starling\/2023\/03\/22\/experimenting-with-form-poetry\/","title":{"rendered":"Experimenting with Form Poetry"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<h3 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Andrew Winslow<\/h3>\n\n\n\n<p>Poetry has become something of an enigma in our culture.&nbsp; While it feels like a dying art, it simultaneously lives on.&nbsp; While many people have lost interest in reading or writing it, poetry still seems to hold a sacred space in our hearts.&nbsp; From those who defend the practice of poetry, I hear a lot of blame placed on an overcrowding of the market with bland or outright bad poetry.&nbsp; I hear a lot about poor teachers who exhort their students that there is no wrong way to do poetry, a fact that is true, but often abused.&nbsp; I think a lot of people feel like they want to try their hand at poetry at least once in their life.&nbsp; Those that like the experience often want to continue writing, but the task feels daunting when confronted with the complex forms and structures outside of free verse poetry.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-embed alignright is-type-photo is-provider-flickr wp-block-embed-flickr\"><div class=\"wp-block-embed__wrapper\">\nhttps:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/60263275@N00\/4757004\n<\/div><figcaption class=\"wp-element-caption\">&#8220;<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/60263275@N00\/4757004\" target=\"_blank\">magnetic poetry<\/a>&#8221; by\u00a0<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/www.flickr.com\/photos\/60263275@N00\" target=\"_blank\">surrealmuse<\/a>\u00a0is licensed under\u00a0<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/creativecommons.org\/licenses\/by-nc-sa\/2.0\/?ref=openverse\" target=\"_blank\">CC BY-NC-SA 2.0<\/a>.<\/figcaption><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>Many people see the plethora of poetic forms as a roadblock, a ball and chain on creativity and free expression.\u00a0 But nothing could be further from the truth.\u00a0 The fact is, we are drawn to a good beat, a flowing rhythm, or a clever rhyme scheme.\u00a0 Just look at the modern music market, with lyrics to many songs that sound like poems when read instead of sung.\u00a0 A lot of them follow the same pattern, based on style, and people love it.\u00a0 Working with fixed forms is challenging, but the benefits are worth the effort.\u00a0 It can make a poem come alive, make the emotions you try to express jump off the page.\u00a0 In this post, I will walk through some basic examples of how to begin playing with structure and form, and show some examples of easy(er) to use fixed forms. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\">Reasons to Experiment with Fixed Forms<\/h4>\n\n\n<ol>\n<li>Using free verse is all well and good, but just because you <em>don\u2019t<\/em>\u00a0have to<em>\u00a0<\/em>structure a poem in a particular way does not mean that you\u00a0<em>shouldn\u2019t<\/em>\u00a0give it a structure of some kind.\u00a0 Play around with the lines and stanzas.\u00a0 What makes your poem look good?\u00a0 What layout emphasizes the major points and emotions of the poem?\u00a0 These are the two most important questions to ask when playing with structure.<\/li>\n<li>Messing with meter and rhythm can be difficult.\u00a0 Believe me, I know.\u00a0 I consider myself a poet and I still struggle with it.\u00a0 The easiest thing I can recommend is to pay attention to your syllable count.\u00a0 Look things up if you have to, just make a pattern out of the syllables first without worrying about stresses or iambs or anything like that.\u00a0 Then, and this is the most important part of crafting any poem, read it out loud.\u00a0 If there are any portions that sound weird or you stumble over consistently, then try to re-work it until you find something that does work with the syllable count.\u00a0 You don\u2019t even have to know why something works or doesn\u2019t work, as long as it sounds good you\u2019ll be fine.<\/li>\n<li>If you\u2019re feeling ambitious, try one of the fixed forms.\u00a0 One of the biggest mistakes I see aspiring poets make is to be intimidated by fixed forms because all they can think of is the Sonnet.\u00a0 There\u2019s a reason the Sonnet is the golden standard in English poetry,\u00a0<em>it\u2019s really hard to master,\u00a0<\/em>that\u2019s why Shakespeare was considered a genius poet.\u00a0 There are much easier, though still challenging, poetic forms that don\u2019t rely on meter or rhyme schemes.\u00a0 Repetition is a good place to start.\u00a0<\/li>\n<\/ol>\n\n\n<h4 class=\"wp-block-heading\">A Few Forms to Try<\/h4>\n\n\n\n<p>Try the Ghazal style on for size: Stanzas made of two lines each, and the end of every second line is the same word.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<pre class=\"wp-block-verse has-text-align-left\">Next time don\u2019t bother\r\n\rNothing gets past me, dear\r\n\r\n\rI know what happens in my own house\r\n\rOr did you think otherwise, dear\r\n\r\r\nI don\u2019t want to deal with this again\r\n\rBut I will if I have to, dear<\/pre>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Okay, so it\u2019s not my best work.\u00a0 I just slapped it down as an example, sue me.\u00a0 But you get the idea.\u00a0 You can add as many two-line stanzas as you want, so it works well for almost any size.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you want to try something a little more ambitious, a Sestina is an interesting workout to craft.\u00a0 They\u2019re made up of six stanzas with six lines each and an end stanza of three lines, so poems written in this form are big.\u00a0 The most interesting part is that the word at the end of every line gets reused throughout the poem in this pattern:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<pre class=\"wp-block-verse\">ABCDEF\r\n\rFAEBDC\r\nCFDABE\r\n\rECBFAD\r\n\rDEACFB\r\n\rBDFECA\nThen, in the last half-stanza, the pattern can either take the form of ACE or ECA.<\/pre>\n\n\n\n<p>Notice that the word at the end of every last line in a stanza is used at the end of the first line in the next stanza.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you feel like your rhyming is okay but you\u2019re still unsure about meter, I would recommend one of my favorite forms, the Villanelle, which uses rhymes and repetition.\u00a0 It\u2019s made up of five three-line stanzas and one four-line stanza at the end.\u00a0 All the first and last lines rhyme with each other throughout the whole poem, and the second lines all rhyme with each other too, like this:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<pre class=\"wp-block-verse\">A1 b A2\r\n\ra b A1\r\n\ra b A2\r\n\ra b A1\r\n\ra b A2\r\n\rA b A1 A2<\/pre>\n\n\n\n<p>Now, here\u2019s where the repetition comes in, all the A1 lines are exactly the same, they get repeated.\u00a0 Same with all the A2 lines.\u00a0 The effect is rather impressive when you put the work in.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you want a bigger challenge with rhyme and repetition, try a pantoum.\u00a0 This can get tricky, but there\u2019s no harm in trying and coming up with something ridiculous, as evidenced by my poem about how to write a pantoum in the form of a pantoum<\/p>\n\n\n\n<pre class=\"wp-block-verse\"><strong>How to Write a Pantoum\n<\/strong>\n1A It starts and ends with an opening rhyme\n2B Then you move onto the next part\n3A Lines 2 &amp; 4 will be lines 1 &amp; 3 next time\n4B The Pantoum makes repetition an art\n\n2B Then you move onto the next part\n5C By doing the same thing again\n4B The Pantoum makes repetition an art\n6C The structure is really quite plain\n\n5C By doing the same thing again\n7D The Pantoum maintains a beat\n6C The structure is really quite plain\n8D The rhythm is easy and neat\n\n7D The Pantoum maintains a beat\n9A It goes as long as the author has time\n8D The rhythm is easy and neat\nA1 It starts and ends with an opening rhyme<\/pre>\n\n\n\n<p>There are many other styles and forms to play with.\u00a0 Look up a list and try a few.\u00a0 Try to stick to the form as closely as possible, because an unspoken truth of poetry is the more challenging it is to write, the more impressive the results can be.\u00a0 Push yourself, but find the style that works best for you<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Andrew Winslow Poetry has become something of an enigma in our culture.&nbsp; While it feels like a dying art, it simultaneously lives on.&nbsp; While many people have lost interest in reading or writing it, poetry still seems to hold a sacred space in our hearts.&nbsp; From those who defend the practice of poetry, I hear 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