{"id":868,"date":"2021-10-12T10:00:00","date_gmt":"2021-10-12T10:00:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=868"},"modified":"2022-03-18T19:58:24","modified_gmt":"2022-03-18T19:58:24","slug":"weaving-without-numbers-the-literature-review-scientific-writing-part-4","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/2021\/10\/12\/weaving-without-numbers-the-literature-review-scientific-writing-part-4\/","title":{"rendered":"Weaving Without Numbers: The Literature Review: Scientific Writing \u2013 Part 4"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>In my previous blogs in this series on scientific writing, I have covered&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=828\">what scientific writing is<\/a>, the<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=845\" data-type=\"URL\" data-id=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=845\">&nbsp;characteristics good writers develop<\/a>, and the basic structure\/purpose of&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\" data-type=\"URL\" data-id=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\">different sections of a scientific paper<\/a>.&nbsp;This is all well and good (well, at least I think it is\u2026.and you\u2019re still here, so I\u2019m hoping you do too), but I\u2019ll venture that at least one of you is thinking, \u201cbut how&nbsp;does this apply to the paper I have to write this semester?\u201d&nbsp;(I\u2019m looking at you, Psy 328 students.) In this blog and the next, I want to focus on a specific kind of science writing, the kind that most of you will encounter as your run of the mill \u201cresearch paper\/literature review&nbsp;assignment.\u201d&nbsp;Today,&nbsp;I will focus on conceptualizing a&nbsp;<em>literature review;<\/em>&nbsp;in the next post I will pull back the curtain on a recent&nbsp;literature review&nbsp;I wrote and walk you through my process.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>The&nbsp;Literature Review<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>A literature review is a summary and synthesis of what other researchers have studied and found about a specific topic.&nbsp;This differs in important ways from the&nbsp;<em>introduction-methods-results-discussion&nbsp;<\/em>format I discussed&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\" data-type=\"URL\" data-id=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\">previously<\/a>.&nbsp;Literature reviews bring together different programs of research or&nbsp;theories&nbsp;or they synthesize research in a way that suggests new ideas or theories. The goals of a literature review will vary as a function of the intended audience; effective writers (of all stripes, not just science writers) know who their audience is,&nbsp;and they communicate directly&nbsp;<em>to them,&nbsp;<\/em>an issue I take up in&nbsp;my next post. Literature reviews are a key staple of any body of research (or, thinking in the metaphor from my&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\" data-type=\"URL\" data-id=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/?p=855\">last blog<\/a>, a&nbsp;section of tapestry) because they provide an&nbsp;<em>overview<\/em>&nbsp;of that part of the tapestry.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Literature reviews do not have all the sections of the APA style paper but share the end goal of describing how bits of the tapestry&nbsp;(our knowledge, as informed by emerging and ongoing research and analysis)&nbsp;fit together.&nbsp;Literature reviews&nbsp;are a type of&nbsp;research papers&nbsp;<em>without original data<\/em>&nbsp;and are thus,&nbsp;at their core,&nbsp;conceptual.&nbsp;To write an effective literature review&nbsp;it is vital to&nbsp;know what you want to say and bring in appropriate evidence (other people\u2019s research) to build your case. A literature review isn\u2019t&nbsp;driven by or organized around a specific set of data&nbsp;but rather the idea(s) of the&nbsp;writer.&nbsp;When writing a literature review, a very common type of paper assignment in college, you need to&nbsp;be able to clearly answer the questions:&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<ul><li>Why would someone read this paper\/what should they know\/think when they are finished?&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/li><li>What is the thing that you&nbsp;have to&nbsp;tell them?&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/li><\/ul>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"683\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-683x1024.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-872\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-683x1024.jpg 683w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-200x300.jpg 200w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-768x1152.jpg 768w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-1024x1536.jpg 1024w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-1365x2048.jpg 1365w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-880x1320.jpg 880w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-830x1245.jpg 830w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-1440x2160.jpg 1440w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-820x1230.jpg 820w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-670x1005.jpg 670w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-320x480.jpg 320w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-300x450.jpg 300w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/ludovica-dri-Bc_y35IwUHw-unsplash-scaled.jpg 1706w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 683px) 100vw, 683px\" \/><figcaption>Photo by <a href=\"https:\/\/unsplash.com\/@wanderluly?utm_source=unsplash&amp;utm_medium=referral&amp;utm_content=creditCopyText\">Ludovica Dri<\/a> on <a href=\"https:\/\/unsplash.com\/s\/photos\/reading-a-paper?utm_source=unsplash&amp;utm_medium=referral&amp;utm_content=creditCopyText\">Unsplash<\/a><\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>As you will see when I share my process in the next blog, I find&nbsp;<em>the process of writing<\/em>&nbsp;to be utterly instrumental in the development of&nbsp;how I answer these important literature review questions.&nbsp;If you don\u2019t have a clear idea of what you want your reader to know when you start writing, you should, at minimum,&nbsp;know&nbsp;after numerous rounds of revision.&nbsp;By the time your paper is finished you should be able to share in a sentence or two the \u201cbig picture idea\u201d that your paper is engaging. (This is why you should always, always (!) write your abstract last.&nbsp;If you write your abstract first, you should have to re-write it to reflect the final organization which will change through the process of writing and revision.) If you can\u2019t summarize your big idea in a&nbsp;few sentences (the famed \u201celevator pitch\u201d), I would question whether you have a clear and focused idea of what your paper is about.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Keep in mind that your words-on-paper are the&nbsp;<em>only<\/em>&nbsp;access that your reader has to your thoughts. No matter how brilliant your thoughts are, if your&nbsp;reader can\u2019t fully discern them from your words-on-paper, your thoughts will be unable to make the desired impact. For me, my revision process is, in part, how I decide what I want to say (i.e.,&nbsp;do I need to explain this more? This bit of information is interesting, but does it enhance my story or is it tangential to it?). My revision process also helps me focus on whether I am organizing my thoughts in a way that&nbsp;achieves my goals (e.g., communicates my ideas and thoughts).&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Once you know what you want to say in a literature review, remember that the research needs to be presented in a way&nbsp;that&nbsp;<em>tells a story,&nbsp;<\/em>the story of the thing you want your reader to know. If you are telling a story, that means that every citation, idea, or theory&nbsp;you include has a purpose\u2014to advance, nuance, enrich\u2014the storyline.&nbsp;Citations are the&nbsp;<em>evidence&nbsp;<\/em>of the thing you have said.&nbsp;Each sentence should contribute to the developing plotline of discovery you are leading your reader on.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Take, as an example, a&nbsp;literature review on \u201ceyewitness testimony.\u201d&nbsp;This is a massive topic with lots of research exploring different aspects of eyewitness testimony. If you were to go to google scholar or the&nbsp;<a href=\"https:\/\/calbaptist.edu\/college-of-behavioral-and-social-sciences\/center-study-human-behavior\/research\/cbu-library-resources\" data-type=\"URL\" data-id=\"https:\/\/calbaptist.edu\/college-of-behavioral-and-social-sciences\/center-study-human-behavior\/research\/cbu-library-resources\">library database<\/a>&nbsp;and search \u201ceyewitness testimony\u201d you will get a&nbsp;<em>ton&nbsp;<\/em>of sources&nbsp;exploring the many dimensions of eyewitness testimony. You might find some&nbsp;about how it is used in a courtroom, how race, gender, and age influence accuracy, and a whole host of memory biases that we need to consider. Yet, the&nbsp;<em>quantity<\/em>&nbsp;of sources says nothing about whether these sources should all be grouped together in&nbsp;<em>this&nbsp;<\/em>paper that you are writing. Just selecting a few and talking about them consecutively does&nbsp;<em>not<\/em>&nbsp;tell a good story. Imagine a paper that looked like an exploded paintball on the diagram below; the splatter&nbsp;(each citation\/idea)&nbsp;is random, only loosely connected to the (very broad) concept of \u201ceyewitness testimony.\u201d As the splatter is random, so is this kind of&nbsp;paper.&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"aligncenter size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"1024\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-1024x1024.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-871\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-768x768.png 768w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-880x880.png 880w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-830x830.png 830w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-820x820.png 820w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-470x470.png 470w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-670x670.png 670w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-360x360.png 360w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-320x320.png 320w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1-276x276.png 276w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1.png 1080w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><figcaption>The splatter of a paper written without a cohesive theme and clear focus leaves the reader wondering what the point of the paper was. Just as these yellow splatters are disjointed and unorganized, a paper without a clear structure to connect ideas and citations will read as disjointed and unorganized.<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>What you want to do in any literature review is have a clear idea of your focus (for example, where the yellow arrow is pointed in the diagram:&nbsp;a paper on how race, gender, and age interact with memory biases to influence eyewitness testimony). In this example, such a focus will help you determine to include&nbsp;<em>only<\/em>&nbsp;the research on race, gender and age on eyewitness testimony that overlaps with research on memory bias. There will be a lot of research on race, gender, and age as well as memory biases in eyewitness testimony, but when you have clarified that you are focusing on&nbsp;where they meet, it will help you know when to exclude interesting research that is not laser focused on your relevant topic.&nbsp;Such a focus is&nbsp;a really important&nbsp;first step (one that can emerge in the organization and revision of the paper&nbsp;as writing can refine the focus), but keep in mind that you will still need to organize the ideas in a way that is coherent, logical, and persuasive (more on that in the next blog).&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" loading=\"lazy\" width=\"1024\" height=\"1024\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1024x1024.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-870\" srcset=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-1024x1024.png 1024w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-300x300.png 300w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-150x150.png 150w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-768x768.png 768w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-880x880.png 880w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-830x830.png 830w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-820x820.png 820w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-470x470.png 470w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-670x670.png 670w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-360x360.png 360w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-320x320.png 320w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image-276x276.png 276w, https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/09\/image.png 1080w\" sizes=\"(max-width: 1024px) 100vw, 1024px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>As I will tell my students:&nbsp;there needs to be some reason to include&nbsp;all of&nbsp;the citations, ideas and theories&nbsp;in your paper. Why are they together in these pages?&nbsp;To&nbsp;answer this question, you need to have a clear focus of what your paper is about&nbsp;and what it might be related to, but&nbsp;also what it&nbsp;is&nbsp;<em>not&nbsp;<\/em>about.&nbsp;This kind of clarity will guide the sources and ideas that you include as part of your discussion and the choice to not include one.&nbsp;The papers and ideas in your paper should&nbsp;<em>hang&nbsp;together<\/em>&nbsp;to help guide your reader to your&nbsp;ultimate conclusion:&nbsp;an understanding of&nbsp;whatever&nbsp;the thing&nbsp;is&nbsp;that you want&nbsp;your reader&nbsp;to know.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Sneak Peek<\/strong>&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>As a bit of a sneak peak, I\u2019ll tell you that in the next blog, I plan to pull back the curtain on a paper I wrote just this year. The paper, titled&nbsp;<em><a href=\"https:\/\/apcz.umk.pl\/SetF\/article\/view\/34246\" target=\"_blank\" rel=\"noreferrer noopener\">A tale of two perspectives: How psychology and neuroscience contribute to understanding personhood<\/a>,&nbsp;<\/em>is one that I started thinking about in&nbsp;January,&nbsp;2021. I did all the reading and writing for the paper, start to submission, in the month of&nbsp;May,&nbsp;2021. (A timeline not too unlike a typical semester paper assignment.) I have since learned that this paper was accepted for publication (after some formatting fixes and a required reduction in word count)<sup>1<\/sup>. In the next post, I\u2019ll&nbsp;guide you through my process by&nbsp;sharing&nbsp;my notes&nbsp;and behind-the-scenes revisions with&nbsp;commentary on my process. My goal is&nbsp;to share&nbsp;some nuts and bolts for how I go from&nbsp;an&nbsp;idea-in-head and a stack of articles to a&nbsp;<em>science story<\/em>. I\u2019ll address the question of \u201cdo these ideas hang together, given my audience?\u201d mentioned above and tackle the question of \u201cwhere&nbsp;(and how)&nbsp;do I start?\u201d&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Although I want you to stay tuned, I\u2019d also like to hear from you: do you like writing literature reviews? Why or why not? What is the hardest part for you? Share your thoughts below.&nbsp;&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>____________________________________________<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><sup>1<\/sup>I will add a link to the paper here once it is finally published (a process that usually takes longer than we think it should&#8230;).<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>If you found this blog helpful, check out the overview of the whole series\u00a0<a rel=\"noreferrer noopener\" href=\"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/2021\/09\/14\/doing-something-crazy-a-blog-series-on-writing-well\/\" target=\"_blank\">here<\/a>, so that you can find more useful information to develop your writing.<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-large\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"http:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/11\/2021\/02\/CSHB-Blog-Bio-Dr.-Erin-Smith-1024x577.png\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-582\" \/><\/figure>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>In my previous blogs in this series on scientific writing, I have covered&nbsp;what scientific writing is, the&nbsp;characteristics good writers develop, and the basic structure\/purpose of&nbsp;different sections of a scientific paper.&nbsp;This is all well and good (well, at least I think it is\u2026.and you\u2019re still here, so I\u2019m hoping you do too), but I\u2019ll venture that [&hellip;]<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":36,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[143,125,145,126,144,11],"tags":[12,29,18],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/868"}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/36"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=868"}],"version-history":[{"count":10,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/868\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1221,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/868\/revisions\/1221"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=868"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=868"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/blogs.calbaptist.edu\/cshb\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=868"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}